Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

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Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby Black Sword » Mon Nov 15, 2010 3:12 pm

I'm just making my own thread for fanfics. I wrote this one last week and finally published it. Give it a read, please!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6477383/1/Expectations
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Postby Tanith » Tue Nov 16, 2010 8:01 am

I have to put in a good word for Black's story. It's really good, and it's about a 3rd generation hero that's not Sean for a change.
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Postby Black Sword » Tue Nov 16, 2010 2:58 pm

Aw, thanks Tanith!
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Postby H-Man » Tue Nov 16, 2010 3:42 pm

I'll take a gander at it later on (or on the weekend), as ff.net is blocked at my work.
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Postby HTD » Tue Nov 16, 2010 3:58 pm

Love how you wrote Wren, really subtle but compelling piece you have created Black.
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Postby Black Sword » Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:48 pm

What do you know. Another fan fiction already.

Words Given Meaning - sort of follow up to Expectation from Princess Kara's POV.

Check it out and let me know what you think.
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Postby Tanith » Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:59 pm

I haven't read it yet, but wanted to mention that it's really great to see the Phantasy Star section at ff.net return to more writing of the classic series. Thanks for bringing quality fics, BS! (BS? That sounds terrible!)

Off to ff.net I go...
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Postby Black Sword » Mon Nov 22, 2010 2:54 am

Thank you, Tanith! The classic Phantasy Star is the best, if you ask me.

To your review:

I never said Shilka was Orakio's wife. I only gave the name of the garden, and who planted it. *halo*

There will be an explanation for Greck in the next installment!
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Postby Tanith » Tue Nov 23, 2010 2:42 am

Black Sword wrote:I never said Shilka was Orakio's wife. I only gave the name of the garden, and who planted it. *halo*

*yoinks halo* I see what you did there. I still demand you write Orakio fics. :P
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Postby Black Sword » Sun Nov 28, 2010 4:47 pm

Queen. Demigoddess. Laya. But now that she has children, one word has the highest priority: mother.

New fic! I'm on a roll, folks.

Younger Laya for this one. These stories are all related, so I've decided to name them the Royal Twin Arc, thereby confirming there will be more. As well as the existence of two other arcs...

I also used a song to write a section of this fic. The song is called Elegant Force, and I strongly recommend you listen to it while you read that part. Don't worry, you'll know it when you see it.

Motherhood

Feedback always appreciated!
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Postby augmentedfourth » Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:37 pm

Nice story! I especially like how you made Laya and Alair friendly towards each other, especially since they had been romantic rivals at one time.
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Postby Black Sword » Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:38 am

Danke 4th! Anything else you enjoyed or approved of?
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Postby Black Sword » Sun Dec 05, 2010 9:22 pm

Prince Adan is descended from Orakio and Laya, the two deities of the Alisa III. Even if he is only a young boy, he will fight anyone, even a hero of legend, to defend that legacy of pride.

Another fic, everyone! The Royal Twin arc continues! Feedback appreciated, of course.

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Postby Black Sword » Sun Dec 12, 2010 11:56 pm

There are important visitors coming to the artificial moon Dahlia, but Princess Kara is not ready to receive them. Her mother will properly prepare her daughter for what Kara needs to do.

A new fic today, staring Princess Kara. I'm sure everyone can guess who the visitors will be.

Dressing a Moon Princess
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Postby Wing-0 » Mon Dec 13, 2010 2:32 am

Snow White and the Seven Dwarves? =P
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